Man... I'm sorry to break it up but... Game is bad... The writing makes my head ache, the navigation system too..
Most of the pronounce are wrong and the sentence arc is messed up too...
I mean, I'm not an English mother tongue too, but I know, like everyone else, that male has he/him and female has she/her.. 5 mins into the game and I struggle to go on already..
I don't want to be an hater, nor to be toxic, but I suggest you to take some help with the writings, cause for now is poorly written..
The navigation as it is for now, is fidgety.. Also if you skip time in a building you get teleported in the main "map"..
I guess you are at the beginning, but please, before going on with the story, fix some things..
First of all I apologize for not specifying well how to carry out that event since the previous update, now I will gladly explain to you how to do that event, I hope the information is still useful to you, to carry out that event you simply have to study at school on Friday and you should automatically be able to access the event.
As for the father of the protagonist, yes, he is dead, only I have not specified it in the story yet, and as for the mother, there will be incest scenes, but I will try to make them optional more than anything for people who don't like it this type of content
I can't play this. You have white text on a transparent dialog box where it blends in and you have dark text on top of dark background. Looks like an interesting game but it's not friendly for those with very bad eye sight such as myself.
haha I forgot to translate the question about the name lol, as for the other two suggestions, I'll add them for the next update, thanks for your comment
Hi dev, first, what is your native language? It would be good to know what content or tags you have planned for the game, and finally the kinks/fetishes or scenes are going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story by player choice) skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene) or forced for the plot?
You're right, I should have clarified my language XD, well I'll say it here at once, my native language is Spanish, for this reason my English isn't very good at first, although I'm going to improve it, as for the other points that you suggested I will try to put them to give people a better idea of my project, thanks for your comments
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Man... I'm sorry to break it up but... Game is bad... The writing makes my head ache, the navigation system too..
Most of the pronounce are wrong and the sentence arc is messed up too...
I mean, I'm not an English mother tongue too, but I know, like everyone else, that male has he/him and female has she/her.. 5 mins into the game and I struggle to go on already..
I don't want to be an hater, nor to be toxic, but I suggest you to take some help with the writings, cause for now is poorly written..
The navigation as it is for now, is fidgety.. Also if you skip time in a building you get teleported in the main "map"..
I guess you are at the beginning, but please, before going on with the story, fix some things..
Hey guys how to get the event some strange in the school?
First of all I apologize for not specifying well how to carry out that event since the previous update, now I will gladly explain to you how to do that event, I hope the information is still useful to you, to carry out that event you simply have to study at school on Friday and you should automatically be able to access the event.
I like the game, keep up the good work!
Where is the mc his father in this game? He dead?
Also will there be both breeding and vaginal pregnancy sex scenes with the mother in the game? I love to see her big incest preggo belly eventualy?
As for the father of the protagonist, yes, he is dead, only I have not specified it in the story yet, and as for the mother, there will be incest scenes, but I will try to make them optional more than anything for people who don't like it this type of content
This did not answer my full question. We already know that this game will have incest? I mean its obvious they are his blood related family?
I asked about incest breeding and pregnancy bellies with the mom yes or no?
haha I forgot to answer that XD, at the moment it is not planned that there will be pregnancies as a result of incest or normal relationships
So there wont be breeding ANDDDDDD pregnancy bellies scenes with the mom via incest?
I can't play this. You have white text on a transparent dialog box where it blends in and you have dark text on top of dark background. Looks like an interesting game but it's not friendly for those with very bad eye sight such as myself.
oh, sorry for this inconvenience in the text, I will improve it in the next update, thanks for pointing out this bug in the interface
Nice
Putting a link to your itch.io page in the about section would be nice.
Remembering the language choice is also something to consider as do you really need to ask it every time? No, once is enough for most players.
This is somewhat dumb but for Ren'Py you need to add an extra _() to the input so it translates the prompts in other languages.
start.rpy
$ name = renpy.input(_("¿Como deseas llamarte?"))
translate english strings
# game/start.rpy:18
old "¿Como deseas llamarte?"
new "What do you want to be called?"
haha I forgot to translate the question about the name lol, as for the other two suggestions, I'll add them for the next update, thanks for your comment
Happy to help. For the English quit screen forgot an 'n'. A few of the Notify messages also need translated in HouseMap.rpy
haha I must pay more attention to my work in the next update, thanks for pointing out the errors
Hi dev, first, what is your native language? It would be good to know what content or tags you have planned for the game, and finally the kinks/fetishes or scenes are going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story by player choice) skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene) or forced for the plot?
Thanks, good luck.
You're right, I should have clarified my language XD, well I'll say it here at once, my native language is Spanish, for this reason my English isn't very good at first, although I'm going to improve it, as for the other points that you suggested I will try to put them to give people a better idea of my project, thanks for your comments